Wednesday, 8 June 2011

Softly now, you owe it to yourself.

Oh loves, what to do?
Is it a game of chance?
Or merely circumstances?
This world, it won't wait for you
it's got its own things to do.
The suns going to rise and push another night away.

Lost.
Inside my head.
Silenced by silence.

I feel like I've lost all things; all parts of me I held dear.
I miss you. I miss you more than words can say.
The space where you used to be - a wild valley that cannot be filled.
Is it naive to think that things have changed?
That we could have a chance at our own happiness?
You and me were meant to be, how has it come to this?

I'd write my soul down for you to see,
but these words all seem insignificant.
How can I tell you everything you need to know when all I have are these ugly, impatient words?
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11 comments:

  1. Jéanne8 June 2011 at 20:45

    In case you missed it yesterday, this one was for you:

    http://sincerelycinnamonbrown.blogspot.com/2011/06/day-7.html

    Love Me. <3. XXX.

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  2. Mich9 June 2011 at 04:26

    Your words are most certainly not ugly. They're quite lovely, actually--reminds me a bit of Tennyson's poetry, actually. <3

    Sorry you're feeling lost. I hope you find your way.
    xoxo

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  3. Anafly9 June 2011 at 08:13

    Your writing is oh so gorgeous, at first I even thought you were quoting a poet or something along those lines. I agree with Mich, your words are DEFINITELY not ugly, they are beautiful.
    Love Anafly
    xxx

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  4. Peridot (G+P)9 June 2011 at 09:42

    You take ugly words and turn them into something beautiful.

    You are an alchemist of rare talent.

    xoxo

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  5. Jéanne9 June 2011 at 23:04

    Hey, Hunny-bunny!

    I have a small challenge for you, a way to take a little break from the sadness. I'm totally crap at poetry, but an you're awesome poet, so I'd like to ask you to write a poem about hummingbirds, they're my latest totem animal and I just love them!

    Check this out for inspiration and to see what makes them such awesome totems!

    http://www.whats-your-sign.com/hummingbird-animal-totem.html

    I hope today was better, even if it was only marginally so, it's a start!

    Remember that I'm thinking about you. <3. XXX.

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  6. Anonymous9 June 2011 at 23:31

    Your words are beautiful!
    Stay strong!


    LOVE!

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  7. Melee10 June 2011 at 03:05

    I know the feeling of words being inadeqaute for the emotion I wish to convey.
    But this is beautiful, dear. Your words are the antithesis of ugly.

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  8. Anonymous10 June 2011 at 06:34

    You are just too magical.
    Sadness consumes us all. Don't let it suffocate you; we're here for you. x

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  9. black angel10 June 2011 at 22:04

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  10. black angel10 June 2011 at 22:05

    I just want to say,
    I exactly know how you feel.
    I'm sitting here and I'm just crying,
    but crying helps.
    and I know...
    Heather,Be strong now becouse things will get better. It might be stormy now but it can't rain forever.

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  11. helloxbeautiful11 June 2011 at 18:13

    You're so lovely, and wonderful.
    Your words pierce right into my soul, and make my heart ache to just give you a big, huge hug. Your words are not ugly, or impatient. They are true, and show emotion. You're real unlike so many of the people in the world today.
    How could you ever think you're anything but wonderful?
    I'm sorry for the pain you're feeling.
    I understand it to an extent because I'm going through the same thing, too... But everybody goes through it differently.
    Surely, you must know, that I am here for you, and I love you, oh so much.
    Stay strong, love. <3



    xx

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